I'd been trying out the technique of deliberately overwriting the emotional exposition in first draft, so that when I came back later I could remember what was supposed to be going on emotionally, and could then hack out all the signposting.
Hey, I do that sometimes! Only not so much with the purposeful technique thing. *g*
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Hey, I do that sometimes! Only not so much with the purposeful technique thing. *g*
Yay for you writing again!