New story posted

[katallison]

Luck.

I originally started this for the "three-way" challenge on dS Flashfiction, but as usual things got a bit away from me. It's Vecchio in Vegas, it's 21K, it's uncheerful (you're so surprised, I know). Many thanks to eyrea for beta!

As always, comments and critique are welcomed, here or at kat@mrks.org.

Comments

[dine.livejournal.com]

so exactly perfect - dark but right. you nailed this so beautifully, and I'm so glad I read it instead of working.

[katallison.livejournal.com]

Hey, any day I can keep people from working is a day well spent! *g*

Many thanks, Dine; I try not to write dark just for dark's sake, and it makes me really happy to know that you felt I hit the balance right here.