More or less ditto. I get little snippets, maybe 5 minutes of action, that have emotion and/or backstory attached to them, but they don't go anywhere themselves. So I'm stuck with, say, they've been under this canoe for a couple hours now and strangely it's Fraser who's impatient, fidgeting, and Ray who's like, "dude, chill out." But I don't know how they got there or what happens next, and it comes out like, "so they shot the bad guys and then they fucked, the end." Which is no good at all.
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Date: 2005-06-13 12:04 pm (UTC)I get little snippets, maybe 5 minutes of action, that have emotion and/or backstory attached to them, but they don't go anywhere themselves. So I'm stuck with, say, they've been under this canoe for a couple hours now and strangely it's Fraser who's impatient, fidgeting, and Ray who's like, "dude, chill out." But I don't know how they got there or what happens next, and it comes out like, "so they shot the bad guys and then they fucked, the end." Which is no good at all.